Wednesday, January 8, 2014

Whose that author?




One of the bad guys was going over the passenger list. Well, that would tell John if there had been a security leak of some sort. But if there were, he couldn't do anything about it. Not yet. Not until he knew what was going on. Sometimes you just had to sit and take it and- The guy at the head of the left-side aisle started moving, and fifteen feet later, he was looking down at the woman in the window seat next to Alistair. "Who are you?" he demanded in Spanish.

The lady replied with a name John didn't catch-it was a Spanish name, but from twenty feet away he couldn't hear it clearly enough to identify it, mainly because her reply had been quiet, polite . . . cultured, he thought. Diplomat's wife, maybe? Alastair was leaning back in his seat, staring with wide blue eyes up at the guy with the gun and trying a little too hard not to show fear.

A scream came from the back of the aircraft. "Gun, that's a gun!" a man's voice shouted-

Shit, John thought. Now everybody would know. The right-aisle guy knocked on the cockpit door and stuck his head in to announce this good news.

"Ladies and gentlemen . . . this is Captain Garnet . . . I, uh, am instructed to tell you that we are deviating from our flight plan. . . . We, uh, have some guests aboard who have told me to fly to Lajes in the Azores. They say that they have no desire to hurt anyone, but they are armed, and First Officer Renford and I are going to do exactly what they say. Please remain calm, stay in your seats, and just try to keep things under control. I will be back to you later." Good news. He had to be military trained; his voice was as cool as the smoke off dry ice. Good. 

5 comments:

ricpic said...

To quote Capote: "That's not writing, it's typewriting."

An editor, my kingdom for an editor.

Cody Jarrett said...

Six feet over the rainbow you'll find your answer.

Lem the artificially intelligent said...

I know that scene. that's from "me love you long time" Full Metal Jacket.

MamaM said...

his voice was as cool as the smoke off dry ice. Good.

That line I liked.

Six feet over the rainbow but "blacker than black" according to the wiki who reports the author to have been a lifetime member of the NRA..

The Dude said...

Dead guy. I wonder if I can have his lifetime NRA membership if he's not using it.