Friday, November 29, 2013

Whose that author?

Kassel, capital of the province of Hesse-Kassel

“Poor Wilhelm,” Amalie Elisabeth murmured to herself, as she gazed through the window on the snow-covered ground. That ground would turn into a very cheery and pleasant garden, come the spring. But for now, it just looked cold and bleak.

Her own mood had been cold and bleak, ever since her husband was killed in that stupid, pointless war in Poland. Mike Stearns had been right about that war, as he was right about so many things. The fact just made the landgravine’s mood bleaker, of course. Her differences with Stearns and his party still remained; extraordinarily wide in most places, if nowhere quite as deep as a chasm. Why could her own side in this great political dispute not produce a man to match him?

She’d hoped that Wilhelm Wettin would be that man, once. But for all his undoubted intelligence he’d proven too prone to short-sightedness. And now that short-sightedness had led him into a prison cell. It might yet lead him to the executioner’s block.

In an odd sort of way, though, the news of Wilhelm’s arrest had improved her spirits. Not cheered her up, certainly. But there was a greater ease about her now, a certain lightening of dark airs. Whatever else, Wilhelm had been a good friend for many years. It had pained her greatly — her husband, too — to watch him sink deeper and deeper into the mire.

He was out of it now. Whatever happened, no more blame or fault could be placed upon him. She was glad for that, if nothing else.

28 comments:

The Dude said...

Well, the first perma-link goes to Eric Flint.

Trooper York said...

Ha!

Sorry.

I need a good copy editor, just sayn'

The Dude said...

I would have to charge you double based on how you butcher the English language.

But if you wrote more shoot-outs and had some car chases, well, we could tawk!

Cody Jarrett said...

Careful Sixty--it's not butchering the language, it's local color.

Don't be one of them big-aughts.

I'll tell Crack and he'll write something mean about you.

Lem the artificially intelligent said...

That horse seems small for that rider.

just saying..

chickelit said...

Lem said...
That horse seems small for that rider.

It loks to be about 1 & 1/2 Hans tall.

Err, Huns tall.

You get the pun.

MamaM said...

It loks to be about 1 & 1/2 Hans tall.

It also loks to be uprising, which could be a clue or dumb luk.

blake said...

Heh. Troop hasn't left a link giveaway in in a while.

Michael Haz said...

Sixty, would the price change if there was more *human interaction* in Trooper's novel?

The Dude said...

What is this "human interaction" of which you speak?

ricpic said...

You can run from your Westphalian ancestry, Wilhelm DeBlasio, but you can't hide! Or is that your Thuringian ancestry? Your Rheinisch ancestry? Your Saxon ancestry? And marrying a schvartz doesn't get you off the hook either!!!

Cody Jarrett said...

why is it that schvartz sounds so...nasty?

ricpic said...

German: schwarz = black

Yiddish: schvarz = black

It's a purely descriptive word in either language. Not slang. Not pejorative.

MamaM said...

why is it that schvartz sounds so...nasty?

The sounds themselves, from the slushing schv, to the hard ar, to the contemptuously buzzing tz at the end are part of the problem. There's no lilt, softness, or swing to the word. It's slush and burst. The other piece for me is that I haven't had experience hearing it used in a benign or respectful context by others, so I'm unclear if it's a slur or a neutral word for the color black.

Hearing it reminds me of the phrase "...they shoot out their lips" from the Jewish Psalms, put to music by Handel in a tenor recitative: ...they laugh him to scorn; they shoot out their lips, and shake their heads saying...

Historically recognized behavior in shvartzes and non shvartzes alike.

ricpic said...

I had an uncle named Nat Schwartz. Very common last name among Jews. Nat Black.

An aside: Troop thinks my whole self-definition is that I'm a Jew. Understandable because I talk about it so frequently here. The fact is that everyone, IMO, is constantly aware of being a something. And it's a myth to think that even a member of the most "in" group or established group, say a WASP, isn't. All you have to do is read John Cheever. Why, every page, every sentence is suffused with a
certain way of looking at the world, of being in the world. Or you just have to look around and
observe. It's obvious. I mean, look at Sixty. Constantly plotting revenge on the Northern
Aggressors. You'll get there, Sixty, you'll get there.

When I worked for the Welfare Department, my fellow workers, especially the Cubans, were always talking about Canadians. So one day I asked and learned it was code for blacks. Schvarz worked as code for Jewish immigrants because hardly any black knew what the word meant. Am I supposed to make sense?!

Michael Haz said...

I used to take a schvitz wit a couple of schvartzes back when I work out at the JCC.

Michael Haz said...

Krauthammer's Law: Everyone is Jewish until proven otherwise

Essay here.

If you have not downloaded or purchases his new book, you should do so. It is very good reading.

Cody Jarrett said...

German: schwarz = black

Yiddish: schvarz = black

It's a purely descriptive word in either language. Not slang. Not pejorative.


I know.

I also know it's not slang or a pejorative. It just sounds slightly nasty to my ear.

MamaM said...

Troop thinks my whole self-definition is that I'm a Jew.

Does he? While it may be the focus of his ball busting, Jewishness isn't what comes through for me. What knocks my socks off is the river of something vibrant that rolls along underneath the gloom and angst. Not sure if that relates to jewishness or not, or is just part of peculiar treasure.

When families, groups and communities start assigning roles and defining others according to those roles, trouble follows.

When the definition of SEXY was recently and boldly ascribed to Darcy, I wondered how that notion evolved and what it was based on? The sparkle of sweetness, vulnerability and interest shown, or the pictures used as avatar?

Well, that lead to wonderment over all the possibilities for declaring all those who reveal parts of themselves here to be SEXY which brought into consideration:
-Trooper's new bod in his tight fitting, footed PJs.
-Sixty's skill with wood and dangerous situations.
-Cody Jarret's deep rumbling truck, with and without wheels
-El Pollo's playful innovations.
-ChipS's shaded awareness and light sensitivities
-Icepick's ongoing endurance
-Blake's cheekiness and tight butt
-ND's straight up approach
-MrHaz's ability to take and make the curve from all directions
-The Cow's earthy rumination and swish
-Palladian's artfulness
-DBQ's zest!
And last but not least,
-ricpic's well of words

MamaM said...

Add
-Lem's Levity
-Bagoh20's courage to soar
-TT's musical pipe and wooing ways
-Paddy's OOOh!

As for Duststorm John and rc, surely they too have a place at the the Thanksgiving table of SEXY!

chickelit said...

I also know it's not slang or a pejorative. It just sounds slightly nasty to my ear.

How does "swarthy" sound to your ear, Cody? (Cognate with the others). Kind of an earthy tone to me.

chickelit said...

Or the related sordid?

Cody Jarrett said...

Schwartz doesn't. Swarthy doesn't. Sordid doesn't.

Cody Jarrett said...

And I'm officially sorry I mentioned it. I certainly wasn't trying to accuse ric of saying 'nigger nigger' or anything.

Fuck.

MamaM said...

And I'm officially sorry I mentioned it

I'm not. I've heard the word used before, but was unfamilar with how and why it was used. I didn't hear accusations being leveled, but I do find the sound of the word unappealing. Is hearing it any worse than looking at caricature tits the size of bushel baskets? No.

El Pollo: in the sordid category, fester is the sound winner.

MamaM said...

How does "swarthy" sound to your ear...

Better then it's predecessor,swarty!

Also at that link, this: In Baltimore in the 80s of the last century, the German-speaking householders, when they had occasion to speak of Negro servants in their presence, called them die Blaue (blues). In the 70s die Schwartze (blacks) had been used, but it was believed that the Negroes had fathomed it. [H.L. Mencken, "The American Language,"

You think? Here's to fathoming and all it entails!

ndspinelli said...

MamaM, is and always will be, our soul. God bless you.

Michael Haz said...

Thank you MamaM.

Although others here are probably more curvy.